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You looked in my eyes
And stole my mind
I’m caught -
Like that -
In your trap
You seem so innocent
I can’t wade through lies
They’re invisible
My mind ensnared
My heartstrings tied
I gravitate –
I sit and think
Cursing my one track mind
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About that person that you can't get off your mind.
I like the general feeling of this, but I'm not entirely happy with how it came out. Critique please?
I like the general feeling of this, but I'm not entirely happy with how it came out. Critique please?
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I like it! Simple, yet it transmits the message.