literature

One Track Mind

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Literature Text

You looked in my eyes

And stole my mind

I’m caught - 

Like that -

In your trap

You seem so innocent

I can’t wade through lies

They’re invisible

My mind ensnared

My heartstrings tied

I gravitate –

I sit and think

Cursing my one track mind

About that person that you can't get off your mind.

I like the general feeling of this, but I'm not entirely happy with how it came out. Critique please?
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Accord2's avatar
I like it! Simple, yet it transmits the message.